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Simone Senisin's avatar

Hi Jamie, I so resonate with the in-between spaces and what is 'ineffable' ... born through my senses, beyond the language of words, I found myself speaking in silences with my sister-in-law, in the sacredness of her leaving ... her shadows and sins, with a laugh, a smile ... "no more silly ... love, love, love ... you", as she closed her eyes to sleep, to dream her exit. In stillness the silence grows — "with the fingerprints of a whisper". What a beautiful poem. Thank you 🙏💖

Deborah Gregory's avatar

Dear Poet, the place you write from is exquisite! That edge where language brushes against what can hardly be named. The way you speak of the connective pulse, the silence between worlds and words, and the bones of meaning ... brings to mind the poetic landscape of the Soul … the very terrain where poetry breathes before it becomes form.

For me, there’s a sacred moment here where something ancient seems to lean close and whisper, “We cannot touch it with our name intact.” Yesss! Oh how that line shimmered straight through me!

And the way you muse about response ... not as afterthought, but as part of the sacred exchange ... feels so true. It’s that luminous meeting place where poet and reader both step into the same firelight for a moment (or ten!) ... sharing the same breath, the same wonder!

Oh Jamie, you write with firelight and starlight in your hands! Thank you for carrying the flame and letting us gather around it with you. Thank you so much for keeping the circle bright. 💖🙏🔥

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