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Veronika Bond's avatar

Dear Jamie, this is a poem radiating with truth and beauty. Not too many words or layers, lost without words, yet lost for words. The words that allow us to transform this reality, from which we need to escape at times, on the wings of imagination because life can feel too unbearable at those times.

Thank you for reminding us that "Far from escaping reality, poetry rescues us from reality."

and that "metaphor un-names knowledge" ~ some things can only be said in metaphor, because the words describing the facts are simply not enough to capture the experience.

Thank you for letting your hair down from the tower of words, allowing us to climb up and join you in the trap, which may also be an inner sanctuary, inviting us to glimpse truth in the dark, which is where imagination lives, birthing metaphor, to shine a light on those forgotten places and bathe them in love.

Deborah Gregory's avatar

Dear Poet, thank you so much for letting your hair down! For the beauty, wonder, surprise of your words this morning are naming something I’ve always known deep in the marrow of my bones … that poetry, imagination and metaphor aren’t just embellishments in my life, but the very language and tools my psyche turns to whenever factual words can’t hold what’s true. Art does the same for me, it touches something on the inside.

As a poet myself, I know that I've been rescued more than once by an image that arrived truer than any literal one … often it was the only way to name what my younger self/selves had no language for. Once, for me, ("Mother, How Dark the Night Is" p.81) it was my metaphorical neck on the chopping board beside the onions … a child’s terror translated into the only metaphor she could carry at the time.

What you write about imagination as medicine and metaphor as the rope we climb back up with, touches something so deep and true in me! That line in your poem … "let down your hair" … feels mythic in the best way, a "Rapunzel" moment where expression becomes the very bridge between isolation and connection. I recognise that instinctively … how a single image can become a lifeline, a way out of the tower of silence, a way back into one’s own life.

For poetry is how I rescue myself. How I let others in. How I too climb out of my tower.

Do you see what you've done here, Jamie? You put words around the unspeakable. Thank you again for spreading the word, the love and for firing our imaginations with such poetic wonder.

Love and gratitude always, your poet friend, Deborah 🙏💖✨🔥

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